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2017年托福考试作文的高分模板分享

2016-12-22 14:11:55来源:坦途网资讯站分享
导读:想要在托福作文中取得好成绩,不仅要掌握一定的知识点,还需要有学习技巧,而高分作文模板可以为我们提供写作思路,现在让我们看看坦途托福考试网进行的分享吧。

TOEFL(The Test of English as a Foreign Language,简称TOEFL),是由美国教育测验服务社(ETS)举办的英语能力考试,在考试中作文的占分比例很大,今天坦途托福考试网就给大家整理了写作的高分模板,供各位考生参考~

托福独立写作开头高分模板:

Perhaps no issue in this world is as significant to xx(ex:people's success) as xx(ex: education).Despite various responses people may have on the topic that xx( ex:which thing should the education aim at).I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that xx(ex:preparing for careers should have primary consideration.)

Asked what...will do to ..., some xx(ex:teachers) may answer: xx. Admittedly, xx plays a vital part in xx(ex:persons success and happiness).But actually, I think that...

适用于agree or disagree的问题 。

Adj(Marvelous) as it looks at first sight, xx(exmodern technology) does not xx(ex:help students learn information at a greater speed and with higher efficiency ) in most cases; or it could work towards the opposite direction which led xx(ex:students to lose their initiative to learn and explore.)

一上来直接问题的转述:xxxx(exCan we know a person through the types of friends he has)?

当然,可以转述为 Asked whetherxxx,

Different people will give different answers to this question from their own characters, emotional concerns and even educational backgrounds.However, when it comes to me, I firmly believe that...

这个适用于所有问题。。观点对比型(live in small town or live in big city?)

甚至来个简单的, I support the idea that...

以上都、最后一句来一个:

+To better illustrate my point of view, I list several reasons as follows.

托福独立写作中间部分模板:

支持段落1To begin with,.... 中间需要举例一下:For instance

支持段落2Furthermore,... 中间有需要的话再举例一下 There is no better illustration than the example of...

支持段落3,:没有让步段落了就 Last but not the least, 有让步段落就 In addition,...

让步段落:Admittedly, Granted, I tend to agree(concede) that: in some cases(conditions), it may be true that....These cases, however, are rare and therefore are too weak to convince me to walk away from my position .

(When the advantages and disadvantages of X and Y are carefully examined, the most striking conclusion is obvious that…… ) I still firmly believe that.

托福独立写作结尾高分模板:

1.All in all, for the reasons listed above, we can safely conclude that...

It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life.

In conclusion, given the growing demands of career on todays professionals, a fulfilling personal life remains possible by working smarter, by setting priorities, and by making suitable career choices.

2.Since science and technology are becoming more and more essential to modern society, schools should devote more time to teaching science and technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities.

In conclusion, schools should not devote less time to the arts and humanities. These areas of study augment and enhance learning in mathematics and science, as well as helping to preserve the richness of our entire human legacy while inspiring us to further it. Moreover, disciplines within the humanities provide methods and contexts for evaluating the morality of our technology and for determining its proper direction.

3.Job security and salary should be based on employee performance, not on years of service. Rewarding employees primarily for years of service discourages people from maintaining consistently high levels of productivity.

In the final analysis, the statement correctly identifies job performance as the single best criterion for salary and job security. However, the statement goes too far, it ignores the fact that a cost-of-living salary increase for tenured employees not only enhances loyalty and, in the end, productivity, but also is required by fairness.

4.How far should a supervisor go in criticizing the performance of a subordinate? Some highly successful managers have been known to rely on verbal abuse and intimidation. Do you think that this is an effective means of communicating expectations? If not, what alternative should a manager use in dealing with someone whose work is less than satisfactory?

5.In conclusion, supervisors should avoid using verbal abuse and threats. These methods degrade subordinates, and they are unlikely to produce the best results in the long run. It is more respectful, and probably more effective overall, to handle cases of substandard work performance with clear, honest and supportive feedback.文:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so theres no need for the government to help them.的题目。

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